Evaluation question 3

I found our Audience feedback very useful as our draft that we created was not near enough to what we wanted our final piece to be. So it was helpful because we could list and go through the exactly what needed changing and think about how we were going to go about it. After doing our first draft we found that there weren't many shots or any variation of shots. So we thought it would be a good idea to sit at the Mac and go through all of the shots in our first draft and see which we were keeping and then kept adding more in. We felt that this was a really good idea as we found just after 30 of our original shots we had added 30 more in.

I have learnt from the audience feedback that it is good to get a lot of it from different people, So you can take everybody's ideas into consideration. It also helps to get the classes feedback as everybody in the class are all doing different types of genres so they can all add there own individual opinion. I felt that it was good to have an open mind. I also found it very useful especially from the teachers as they were able to tell us that our shots needed to be tighter in so you dont get so much excess space. If they hadnt told us this we might have not been aware of it and it then look messy. Comments like these are little details that make a massive difference as they can show the line where it can look quite professional or really messy. I found that attention to detail was very important and you need to take time to look at the shot you are about to take and make sure nothing that doesnt fit the verisimilitude of shot. We also found that lighting was picked out when it came to the feedback. First we had the problem with shots inside on the stage. This was a problem that we were already aware of as at this moment we werent able to get stage lights that night. Another problem we had was the outside shots that as it got later the lighting changed and became very obvious at the end. So in our second draft we were very conscience of this.